When the teacher isn’t looking
We’ll giggle and we’ll laugh
Paper rockets will fly around
And cut the misery to half
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When the teacher isn’t looking
We’ll eat all that we can
Make all sorts of noises
And bang the desks again
…
When the teacher isn’t looking
We’ll look outside the window
Talk to our imaginary friend
Or get into a row
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When the teacher isn’t looking
The black board, we’ll ignore
And stare into that person’s eyes
The reason we came here for
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When the teacher isn’t looking
We’ll pass a secret message
Pretend we’re under attack
And speak in alien language
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When the teacher isn’t looking
We’ll invent new formulae
Math wouldn’t be boring anymore
Homework’ll equal play
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When the teacher isn’t looking
We’ll fight with books and glue
But the teacher didn’t come to school today
Now we don’t know what to do
Love the ending!
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Love the tone throughout! The ending was very intriguing. Well done.
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nice !
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What happened to your novel? Think we forgot?
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Work in progress
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Thanks for reminding the school days … 🙂
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Welcome
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In my opinion, I think this is one of your better poems. I really like it, hope you enjoy the rest of the evening !
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Thank you so much. Wish you the same
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Wow…You remind me my school days and beautiful time. It’s so beautifully written. It’s amazing Frank 😍😘
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Thanks a lot
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you are welcome 😋
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Take care, my friend. And have a nice day
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Thank you dear ☺️ you too 😇
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It’s been a long time since I was in school but damn of this didn’t bring me back!
“And stare into that person’s eyes
The reason we came here for”
Love that line so much, I was never brave enough to meet their eyes but I remember having particular classes I only really liked cause I was sat next to the one I really liked
Love the rhyme and the rating structure, beautifully lyrical, just a really well thought out and put together piece!!
Plus the twist at the end, the confusion is really funny. Just goes to show kids are just a bunch of attention seekers 😄
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I agree, I love that line too. But I also took from that as staring into that person’s eyes the reason we came here for being the personal interaction and all of the things you are “learning” in school that are not in the books. We learn so much from social interactions and the little games we play as children that it almost shapes us as much if not more than the intellectual learning we do. Definitely dig the poem though!
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You almost took me in my own childhood days… But the ending part hits suddenly. So beautiful. Thank you, Love, nia
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Thanks and welcome
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İf you wish you can visit my blogs too, photography and poetry, but they are both private, you should make a request. Thank you, Love, nia
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Kids will always be kids……I loved the ending, such a sweet twist 😉
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Depends a lot on the teacher. ..with how much zeal she teaches and explains her subject and how much we students understand ….a good and experienced teacher has the power of maintaining the class to a pin drop silence and even students are completely involved in the subject she/he explains
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True
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Ironically enough, I’m writing this comment in class. Nice work on this one, I really like it 🙂
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I can relate to this from both pov.
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I remember teaching some kids like that!
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Cool
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Remembered that good old school 🏫 days. The love and affection we had towards our friends & teachers cannot be found in college.
I love my school.. Very beautifully written @frank😀🙋👍👌✌👏
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Thanks a lot
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Have a party!!
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Sure thing
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aha, the things in life we never knew we were taking for granted of until we were no longer in a position to take advantage of them.
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So true
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Only time reveals to us how good we had it, back, when.
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True
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The sub always meant more goofing off.
I wish I was in class with you. Actually, I’m glad to be done with school. You must be missing it, as it’s been your focus as of late. Maybe you are hankering to go back. Creative writing, perhaps?
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Sort of. Loved the days. Can never write enough about them
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When the Lord isn’t looking? Then what?😇
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We’d just keep that to ourselves
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Too funny, but true. God is merciful!
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Yes indeed
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Loved it. Having been both a student and a teacher I can identify. I particularly like the last line. Nice twist. – Aloha – jpa/
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percyardent I loved your comment almost as much as I loved the poem. I have just started student teaching, so now I have been on both sides as both teacher and student. I can identify. I enjoyed this poem since it is true and beautifully written.
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