Save me from this feeling
Keep me away from touch
Love was supposed to be fun
But it’s hurting me too much
…
Save me from this moment
Keep my heart at bay
Love was supposed to make me smile
But it’s hurting me today
…
This can’t go on
I believe we must end
This can’t go on anymore
Do you have a pretty friend?
…
Everyone knows about it
They weren’t born yesterday
Even a blind man could easily see
What I am trying to say
…
Everyone knows about it
What is there to hide?
I know your true feelings
And you know how I feel inside
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This can’t go on
I believe we must end
This can’t go on anymore
Do you have a pretty friend?
…
Let go of my hand
The time is due
I ain’t worth holding on
And neither are you
…
Let go of my heart
You cannot keep the pace
It ain’t worth holding on
It’s in the wrong place
…
This can’t go on
I believe we must end
This can’t go on anymore
Do you have a pretty friend?
Nice
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Outstanding! ❤
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Again, well spoken. “This can’t go on
I believe we must end
This can’t go on anymore
Do you have a pretty friend?” Yes, we all have one. Not just pretty, Beautiful. Thank you for visiting my blog and liking some posts. A happy New Year to you and yours.
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Right back at you
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Lovin’ it 💖
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Welcome ☺
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& what possibly can that pretty friend do when
em>she is always in your head
she the unrequited….
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Teach me how to smile once again
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cute ! 🙂
but for that the poet must get the one in his head out first…
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Will try
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good luck
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Thank you, my friend
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Nice 🙂
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Thank you
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Beautiful one!
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Loving your posts! ❤
https://womanonrampage.wordpress.com
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Thanks a lot
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You are incredible poet……Lovely !!!
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Thank you
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I really liked it! It flows so beautifully like a song~
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I loved it. ❤
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Two words – Always write 😉
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“Do you have a pretty friend?” is like saying there’s no one else but her at the moment and you wished things were different. Sweet and sad.
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Definitely came from the heart.
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No problem
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This reminded me of one I’d written in 2012 titled Throbs. Hope you enjoy it, and no, I was actually doing great with the love of my life, my wife, at that time. Just a poem flowing from the heart of my creative soul. Let the juices flow! Merry Christmas! 🙂
Throbs
O God! Shake my heart, shake my heart,
Tear it loose that there be anguish no more in me.
Seize the moments between each beat, where love can be silenced, where true love can sleep.
Hold it fast, resist each throb, and silence its voice,
that I might not feel the sting of sweet devotion further.
Why can I not stop the desires of this yearning, yearning, yearnings?
So simple it would seem, just to command, “Be silent my heart, obey my demands”.
Yet, O God; shake my heart, strike it dumb, make its silent till my heart if forever deadened.
Kiss me oh tomb, take whatever it takes, lay hold of my inner most, it’s all too late.
Let me find solace in the deadened beats, where love no longer strains, love no longer speaks.
Annulling that presence and desire’s piercing cries,
Forbearing the aching sweet release, forbearing the requited heart that ever bleats.
For this must I do, so when next you are near, and beyond all control, great love it appears.
When I find I am lost, in the depth of your eyes, at the smell of your hair, or the scent of your sighs.
When I can no longer bear, the draw of your voice,
Or rhapsody’s touch from your skin’s turbulent passion’s torch.
So now I despair; from whence I am but lost of all care or all reason.
What more am I to do, what more of me can belong to you?
O God! Do You not hear? Shake my heart, shake it hard,
Tear it loose that there be anguish no more in me.
Seize the moments between each beat, so love will be silenced, where true love can sleep.
And there let it sleep, even if it must be the long eternal night,
If there I find peace, be it a place of unending release,
a place where even love cannot reach,
Then grant me such peace, and give me said release.
No love! Sweet peace! Released!
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Wow. This is wonderful. Thanks a lot
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You’re welcome.
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Pretty awesome
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Thank you
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So much pain in this. You try to make it light, but it is full of hurt. Much love to you.
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Thank you so much
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Do you have a handsome friend?
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Hehe. I have a mirror
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And so do I 😀
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Just one word…WOW
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Thank you
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