Her birthday is coming
What should I gift her?
I think I’d give her a watch
She likes those silver straps
Whenever she may wear it, she’ll be reminded of all the times I spent with her
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Her birthday is coming
What should I gift her?
I think I’d give her a pen
She always wanted one
Whenever she may use it, she’ll be reminded of all the poems I wrote for her
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Her birthday is coming
What should I gift her?
I think I’d give her a rose
A rose full of thorns
Whenever she may hold it, she’ll be reminded of all the times I bled for her
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Her birthday is coming
What should I gift her?
I think I’d gift her my soul
A soul full of scars
Whenever she may see it, she’ll be reminded of all the times I died for her
Frank Solanki 
I really like your poetry. Simple, so full of emotion and deeply relatable. 🙂
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you are obsessed with her…
and it is dangerous…
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Wow. I didn’t think of it that way
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and… perhaps… you like it that way
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Maybe
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may be she is a major source of your poetry…
you are in a way a mystery, even after reading most of your work , you remain obscured…open yet close…
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Possibly. It hasn’t been intentional though. Often, I just write down whatever that is going on in my head. It is not intended to be mysterious. Just metaphorical
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So beautiful ❤
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Words!!!😍👍
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You GUJJU?
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Yes, but does it matter?
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Nope.. Infact it’s great to see someone writing! Whenever I started something I got criticized but things change with time and patience
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Glad to hear that. Keep it up
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Gheeze. Talk about ‘bloody’ love and going through some painful trials for her. (Cool writing style!)
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btw when is your princess’s birthday ?
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Somewhere in 2017
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so she is n’t a saggi ooops !
i thought it was in this month of Dec
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She could be anything. Hehe
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haha …may be we ppl would get to know when …may be you post one right on her b’day like ..’.today is her b’day’
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Yeah. That would be great
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Very nice, i read u whnever i get off….n u r wrk is really vry beautiful…..😊
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Thanks a lot. Your poem was quite sweet
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dear, if u want to gv me smthng
Thn gv me the feeling
Whn ur heart beats frst tym fr me
Whn ur eyes get stuck on me
Whn ur lips get the taste of mine
Whn ur palm gets lockd fr the vry frst tym
Dear, if u want to gv , gv me
The peace tht i get , whn i rest in ur arms
The pain tht i want to get every single night
The madness of u tht i always want
And The beauty wd which u look at me hundred tyms
Dear, i know tht i am the subjct of ur popularity
Bt trust me , i jst want to hide myself in ur chest silently
All those wrds tht u showr on me , as the symbol of ur love
………….i hv no wrds
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Nice
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Reblogged this on Orthometry.
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So twisted… Love this ! There is something so moving about it! 🙌
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Beautiful
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so she is a sagittarius then…
gift her a musical box
or better still
Gift her your time
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Haha. Nice. Thanks for the suggestion
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Deeeeeeep! Good job!
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Simple. Very nice
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Thanks
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That is a very lovely poem. It does make me think of the reasons why we give gifts.
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Oh thanks
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Thank you for visiting my blog.
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Wow Frank! Really beautiful and rich.
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This so sweet and touching…😊😍 simply amazing
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Thank you so much
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Beautiful….so moving..
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Thank you
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My birthday is coming too 😛
On a serious note, Frank, well-written poem – tell me, is she, or is she not with you?
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She is in my head
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This is so beautiful. 🙂
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Thank you
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Wow Frank! That was incredible to read! 🙂
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Thank you so much
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oh my goodness my pleasure! 🙂
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Take care, my friend. And have a nice day
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Thanks so much same to you! 🙂
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WOWZA, too good!
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Welcome 🙂
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Take care
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I appreciate that.
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Great Poem, Frank!
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Thanks a lot
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Aww such a sweet, beautiful poem ❤
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Thanks a lot
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Wow. This is powerful.
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Thank you
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A beautiful gift for you both, for she can kiss your scars until they fade.
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Yes
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Beautiful gift. The best gift you can give to anyone.
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Yes indeed. Thanks
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You’re welcome.
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Take care, my friend. And have a nice day
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You too.
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Love you! Love your words! Love this one. I’m tearing up now… ♡♡
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Ah, thank you
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Wow, so emotional and beautiful! -Fallen
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Thank you
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