Rest your fears upon my shoulders
Of them, I will take care
Hesitation may be older
Than the love that we share
…
If your faith in me is shaken
And my words do not sound true
Let my soul and pride be taken
And lay them all unto you
…
Raise a fire to take my test
And let me pass through the flames
And if I were to come second best
Go ahead and erase the names
…
But do not put me through the test a second time
And have me repeat the pain
I may consider it a crime
My skin won’t take the flames again
Just beautiful.
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The people we trust the most are less likely the ones that hurt us
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True
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Very deep, and well written. I have feels now. Xp
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Thanks
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Your way with words is amazing to say the least, truly gifted x
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Thank you
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Wow; Incredible!
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Thank you
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I really like lines 3 and 4 – when you set this to music, start from there and you’ll have a great song!
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Hehe. Thanks
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Oh my goodness! I love this so much! Thank you so much Frank!
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Thanks a lot and welcome
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You’re very welcome!
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So touching Frank… 😢💞💞💕
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Thank you so much
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The flame has already purified your mind and soul
No need of retest
Profoundly written
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Thank you
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This is simply beautiful. Frank you have penned it down so well with emotion.
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Jo ishaarey aankhon se karkey tum khud kaheen door kho gaye……..jo dhaagey dilo se bandh key tum yun unhy chhor gaye…….jo vaadey mujhsey karky tum yun unhy tor gaye…..mere dil key khaalipan se abb chaahey tum jitna takra lo ….apney hony ka aihsaas abb chaahein tum mujhy jitna jata lo…..mai abb tumhari nahi , mai abb tumhari nahi
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Nice
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I’m very much feeling tested too, do this resonates.
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Yes, I know
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We walk through flames together, then. Side by side. I will always be there for you, my friend.
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Thank you so much. And I would be here whenever you may need me
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I know. Just hoping we both traverse our tests quickly and painlessly. You are a wonderful friend with a gracious heart.
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And so are you. And I know we will get through
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Your c
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Your confidence gives me hope.
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This is a beautiful poem filled with a lot of relatable emotions.
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Thanks
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I feel like this..
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Oh
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