The oxygen in my pipes is waning
The veins in my head are overflowing
A rush of blood to my head
I lie helplessly in my bed
…
My hands reach out for the phone
My skin can feel my bone
It seems my phone is dead
I lie helplessly in my bed
…
The night passes me by as I think of you
There is very little that I can do
The cold sun seems so dead
I lie helplessly in my bed
Frank Solanki 
Very beautiful lines to comprehend.
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You sorta took the words right out of my head, so I’m glad somebody did. Better it was you. Weird statement, I know.
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Well, thanks for that
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Such deep depression and isolation conveyed in only a few words… beautifully sad piece.
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Thank you
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You’re welcome.
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Take care, my friend. And have a nice day
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You as well!
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I like the repetition because it reinforces for the reader the concept of the depression that is permeating your mood. Nice write…
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Thanks a lot
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Beautifully put……I saw a multitude of faces in my mind as I read, snapshots of residents who lived at the nursing home where I worked.
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Very good written Frank.Checkout my blog please on http://funlife78.WordPress.com
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Can feel the heaviness in your words. So well expressed
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Or longer.
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Yes
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Are you okay, friend? I’m hoping this one is not personal.
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Thanks for the concern, my friend. But this one ain’t personal
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Oh good.
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And I hope you are doing fine too
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Nice of you to ask. I’m making it day to day. Trying to enjoy the present moment as that is all we really have.
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Glad to hear that. May peace be with you and me forever
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deep pain makes for many a poet. If only we could have the poems without the destruction.
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Sad but true
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I understand what you are saying. I’ve had endless thoughts of someone who has been taken from me.
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Beautifully written Frank.
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Thank you
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My pleasure
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Take care. And have a nice day
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You too.
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