Throw some light upon this tale
And then upon my way
Would you help me burn the trail
As I step into the day?
…
And then throw some light up yonder
I cannot see too far
Half the night I sit up and wonder
I do not know who you are
…
Throw some light in my mind
And let me fall asleep
Let me leave everything behind
I cannot lie awake and weep
Frank Solanki 
Frank I could literally read your writing all day, its imaginative, exciting yet with a tinge of sombreness (if that’s even a word).
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Hehe. Thank you so much
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Beautiful and universal – anyone who has not yet felt this way will soon enough. Good to open to fully experience the lows as well as the highs life brings us.
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Thanks
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day and nights can no longer be differentiated in this sleep
and waking up is a dreadful thing
a sleep which gives nothing and feels nothing
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Yes
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Poignant poem. Beautifully penned. I like your writing style.
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Thanks
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Thanks for showing my site some love. I like your rhyme scheme and this poem. We can all use some light or igniting. Not too much though; some of us like to hide. I hope you feel better.
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Thanks
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Anytime, friend
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Have a nice day, my friend
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Oohhh! I like the way you write! I’m trying my best to improve my writing, any tips?
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Do you like what you write? If yes, then it doesn’t matter whether it is good or bad, whether it is grammatically correct or not. Just keep writing to please yourself. And thanks for the like
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Aww thats so sweet of you and yes I love to write. Thank you so much!
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You are welcome. And keep writing, my friend. Nice to meet you
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It is nice to meet you too, please call me Neko :3
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Will do, Neko
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I really enjoyed it. I have a question or two. I wanted to ask how you got so much attention on your blog – any advice is appreciated really! Thanks – and beautiful work!
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Thanks. Just keep writing and you’d get your due
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like the idea of blind (darkness) faith (light) in this piece. nice post. “i don’t know who you are.”
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Thanks a lot
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you welcome
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Have a nice day, my friend
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Not really. But I will be fine.
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Know that there is someone who is praying for your happiness too. And will always do
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I have lots of people in my circle, I am very blessed. And as for any troubles I may have, well, so it is…
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I am so glad to hear that
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Nice new gravatar, too. Change is good. I can tell you are on a new road and it seems like a wonderful path. Much love.
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Thanks again. Love to you as well
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I’m sorry you are hurting again. I wish I could send you that light. If I could I would do it for you. I would burn the trail and help you find your way. I hope if nothing else I can send some peace to you in knowing you have someone who cares in this great big universe and is praying for your happiness.
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Thank you so much for this. I feel quite alright. I hope you are doing fine too
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