I see her face amidst the light
Of a star-studded night
And her voice is like an angel that I hold divine
Asking me if I could cross the line
And make her mine
And take her in my arms and let her shine. Let her shine
…
And I know that a day will come
When we will become
A fallen star on the edge of an unwanted time
So let me stand through this pain
For it’ll never come again
She helps me to forget all that will hurt me. So I let her shine
…
When the rain falls on her face
There is no other place
That I would rather be in that moment of time
Every little hole in my heart
Is crying for a start
And the moon paints a picture of her soul. So I let her shine
This resonates within me. Thank you. And yes a love that allows the shining of another is more than worthy of those four letters – love.
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True. Thanks
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Wow.. This is amazing, truly loving someone and not wanting to change a thing about them. I love this!
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Thanks a lot
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Wow. This was exactly what I needed right now for complicated personal astrological reasons being a fire type woman and having a lot of men try to domesticate me . It really made me feel hopeful. Thank you. It is kind of uncanny because it was literally today when I was thinking and looking and reading at all of this astrological stuff about me and men. It made me feel a lot better.
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Thanks and welcome
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Again, lovely poem
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Thank you
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Beautiful! 😁🐨
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Thank you
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Favorite lines: cross the line, and the moon painting her.
I was a bit distracted by how many times “and” was used in the first half but on the whole I enjoyed the shining imagery.
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Thank you
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Hey, these are nice words, Frank. Simple, but full of meaning.
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Thanks a lot
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Beautiful Frank. Great job.
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Thank you
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Beautiful!!!! Deep!! 💖
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Thanks a lot
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That was lovely.
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Thank you
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Shine on! Beautiful, thanks for sharing
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You are welcome. Take care, my friend
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oddly enough this poem paints a very vivid picture and its really sweet and beautiful
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Thank you
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Wowza, this is beautiful. My fave line: “a fallen star on the edge of an unwanted time”….wowza….
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Thank you
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Most welcome.
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How romantically beautiful..
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Thanks a lot
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That was so beautiful… I don’t think I have enough words to describe it…
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Wow. Thank you so much
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This reads like a song, a beautiful song; I almost sing along to it when I read it, though I know only the lyrics, not the tune : )
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You can give it your own tune and sing it
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Certainly does – thank you for the music Frank
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This is so beautiful…. I really want someone who is going to love me so much….
Simply amazing Frank…. 💞💞👍
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Thanks a lot
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“And take her in my arms and let her shine” So beautiful, the idea that loving someone is holding on to them and letting them stay as they are and shine, not trying to change them.
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Indeed. Thanks
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Frankie, I love this, and I can tell you, I love it again and again. Please can I do a remake? Like in my own words but same title? Please say yes.
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Yes. You can
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Thank you
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Welcome
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To let someone else shine is such deep love. Both for yourself and the other. You never cease to amaze me. Truly. God has given you an amazing gift of words and a heart of gold. No matter what pain or troubles you may ever have, remember that. You can do anything and God has blessed upon you these things.
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Thank you. You may find my words beautiful but it your words that touch my heart. Thanks again
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And your words touch the hearts of all who read them. They tell you so each every poem.
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Yes. You don’t know how grateful and lucky I consider myself for all the support and encouragement I receive for my work
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No luck. Talent. There is no luck involved. You move readers and that is not by luck. It is because you are you. Beautiful you.
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Too kind. Thanks again
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I love this piece. Keep on taking the words from my mouth and my heart 🙂 Wonderful writing.
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Thank you
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Wow!
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Thanks
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Incredibly clear, concise and beautiful. I really enjoyed it.
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Thank you
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Beautiful romance depicted.”Let her shine”..loved it.
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Thanks a lot
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