The clouds pour equally on us
The winds blow the same
Who are we, then, to draw lines
And play this wicked game?
Drawing Lines
The clouds pour equally on us
The winds blow the same
Who are we, then, to draw lines
And play this wicked game?
Frank Solanki 
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poignant social justice statement. I say, “ditto.” #formidableWoman
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Woah
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Short and meaningful..loved reading this poem.
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Thank you for the like Sir. Frank. Pleasure to read your work as well.
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Thanks a lot
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Love this! keep doing what you are doing! This hit home with me today. 🙂
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Lots of love to this piece of your writing 🙂
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Thank you so much
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We are politicians
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Hehe. Yes, we are
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Very nicely written.. good job
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Hi, Frank! You spoke of gospel in there 😉 Keep it up!
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Wow. I didn’t knew that. Thanks
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I love when I find poetry that speaks to me like this! That, for me, is rare. Nicely written Frank!
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Wisdom pour out from your words. Thank you for a good read.
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Thanks and welcome
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I quite like this poem, and the message sent. Reading it was definitely time well spent! ^_^
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Your welcome. ^_^
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Take care and have a nice day
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Beautifully penned
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Of course. Your words are always so alluring.
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Thanks again. Take care, my friend
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The last two lines; solidly done. This is great writing.
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Hehe. So you liked the lines I drew
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Yup! I see what you did there. Lol.
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Hehe. Thanks. Take care and have a nice day
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You’re welcome. You do the same. It’s nighttime here, so I’ll be calling it a night in a few. Peace~
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Peace
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The ego of humanity. To believe in superiority.
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True
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It’s only a few lines, and so powerful!
My post tomorrow (since I only post once a day) is related. It’s in draft form, but the intro, along with a few of my photos begins:
*Unbelief in God, or stating and then following that you will not believe/follow/acknowledge God because you ‘don’t like Him’, or ‘don’t agree with Him’, or any other similar judgement, and then pretending that He doesn’t exist is kind of like stating and then following something like, ‘I don’t follow/believe/agree with the IRS’, and then pretending that they don’t exist.*
Just a preview, I thought you might be interested 🙂
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Oh nice. Thanks
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Hey Frank,
It’s not quite the same message, but I could not resist sending you this from Lord Bowen, 19th Century English Judge:
The rain it raineth on the just
And also on the unjust fella;
But chiefly on the just, because
The unjust hath the just’s umbrella.
Keep up the good work,
Will T.
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Thank you
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