Whenever I set my sights on you, I fall into a deep hole
To get back up and out again, I must leave behind my soul
You used to be the only one with whom I felt free to be me
I will tell you all that I know and the truth shall eventually set me free
Or so it may seem
…
Now our world has fallen apart and it has left us cursing
The old wounds have opened back and now I must set them nursing
Only the brave can withstand the storm and I am quite willing to take the test
Will it be easier to let it pass? Would it be in everyone’s best
To let go of a dream?
…
Situations have become
A warning sign of what is to come
Roads have now begun to lead
Us back to the start at full speed
Only a loser can now claim
To be a victim of his own trap
When there is nobody else left to blame
…
Gush, gush, gush
I hear the winds blowing so loud
Stops me in my tracks. Fills me with doubt
Makes me pray. Turns my head towards the clouds
Teaches me insanity. I am going all out
Gush, gush, gush. I am going all out
I am going all out
Awesome! 🙂 love it ❤
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What a deep feeling and expression of a life journey! Thank you for sharing. Thank you for liking my newest post.
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Thanks and welcome
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I have been in the situation alluded to in this fine poem. I like the way you break the rhyme scheme at the end of the first three verses then the x rhyme is the first line of the last.
Thank you for liking my (Don’t Look Down) poem!
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I must agree…yes. I feel much of these thoughts. I will try to set mine free, too! Gush gush
Indeed!!!
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Hey, have a nice day.
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Very, very nice!!!!!!! 🙂 🙂 🙂
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You’re welcome, Mr. Frank! 🙂
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Deep. Thanks for sharing.
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Nice poem. It seems like you can interpret it in many different ways. At first I thought it was self doubt, or being your worst enemy, then I was thinking about a relationship. That’s what’s great about this poem. Keep them coming!
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I enjoyed it. Nice
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Just beautifully written
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Thanks a lot
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Amazingly written. In awe. Thanks for sharing 🙂
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This post is amazing!You’ve great perspective on life! I’m happy to have come across your blog! 🙂
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Thank you so much
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You’re welcome Frank!😃
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I…. just…. wow! 😍
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