Now the roads are all deserted
What else can they be?
I’m walking this way alone
You’re not coming with me
Every light and sound has vanished
There’s nothing here to see
Even the moon has found a hiding place
Loneliness stings like a bee
The birds have found a shelter
In a mighty yet random tree
I can hear my own footsteps
While my shadow wishes to be free
All the faces are forgotten
I’m left with no memory
I’m tired of monologues
Tell me a different story
But I do remember how we used to
Discuss politics over a cup of tea
And you would also tell me tales about
This planet becoming a sea
Life isn’t my speciality
I know I’ve performed badly
I refuse to do whatever you ask me to
And I refuse you gladly
Now the roads are all deserted
What else can they be?
I’m walking this way alone
You’re not coming with me
I adore that hook. I’m a fan of great hooks in general; that’s kind of my favorite thing about lyrics and poetry and they’re harder to come up with than people give credit for. Great job here.
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Great piece. It almost makes you see the loneliness.
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Almost? Ah, I guess I would have to try harder
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Lol. Maybe not. This is just perfect.
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Thank you
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It is so wonderfully written. Loved it! Thanks for sharing 🙂
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Thank you. Thank you
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Hi there. I like to think of myself as a poet and a writer, and I would just like to say that I love your poems, and I find I can honestly relate to them. Please keep writing.
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Will do. Thanks a lot
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We all go through these emotions. It is the same life of ours
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Sounds quite sad to me….
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Beautiful poetry Sir. ☺☺
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Sir? That is too much respect for me to take
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Haha! I don’t call people by their names, so Sir is just respect! ☺
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Thanks still
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☺☺
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