Will you forgive me?
I know I’ve made a wrong decision
It has cost us a lot
More than we thought
But I’m not a man blessed with precision
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Will you forgive me?
I should have never let you go
I’m here all alone
Relatively unknown
Like a joker in a circus show
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Will you forgive me?
I should have heard what you said
I lost my heart
We were drifting apart
And now I’m even losing my head
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Will you forgive me?
I’m trying my best to be a better man
Better than I was
Better than I am
Trying to give you everything that I can
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Will you forgive me?
And give me just one more chance
And hold my hand
Until the end
And I’ll make this the most memorable dance
lovely
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Thank you
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Hope you don’t fuckup again after saying sorry so eloquently. Lol… jokes. It was really nice. If I was her I’d give you another chance but fuck you up if you fuckup again. More jokes lol. Keep it up.
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Thanks a lot
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Nice! Just don’t fuck up again.
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Sure thing
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This just gave me chills
Honestly. It’s amazing.
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Thanks for saying that. I’m glad you liked it
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Sometimes, I wish I could just leave a bit of the feeling I have as a comment. not words, not pictures, but the little spark of warmth that brings together the light melancholy in the eyes and the enjoyment of the cheeks into the smile of commiseration.
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You did a great job saying everything earnestly..
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Very lyrical, it reads well as a poem, but I think with the right backing it would make a very moving song
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I was actually thinking the same thing as I was reading
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you deserve a second chance.. everyone deserve it š
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very nice. interesting how we both recently posted something similar. check out my last couple posts. dark but i think you’d appreciate it. great entry though. ive been away for a while and its nice to come back to something like this š
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I just read it out loud to a friend….a friend who’s been undoubtedly the most uncertain person…a person who’s always and have been taking love a stride…..I see the agony….in the future… the agony of many “will you forgive me”…..
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It just happened. The idea came about and the words kept flowing
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